Friday, October 28, 2016

TE Ika A Maui

Maui and Island

Maui has 2 sister and 3 brother  one dark night Maui brothers and sister were planning on going fishing to get there vilage some kai to eat.
Maui overheard and decided to go with them so he jump into the boat and life in there overnight.

Then his brother and sisters hop into the boat and sailed out to sea.Then maui jump out of his hiding spot one of his sister scream and jumped out of the boat and hit something onder
the bout. Maui jump into the sea and went down to to the ground and sat on something hard “awch”that heret Maui swim back up to the top and said there is something down the help me pull it up.

Maui started to cry “ Sorry Maui but the us do it for once”

Maui did not want to do that he was not going to put up a fight for it he love his brothers and sister.
His brother and sister went down and elisa one of the sister
  Got her foot stuck in something and the brothers and sister
Yelling  and screaming for maui help but he said you did not want my help so no you do it maui put his hock on his head a went sleep.

Meanwhile brothers and sister were trying to get elisa out her face was turning blue but maui did not keer about anything they did but then maui realised that he is who he is they can't tell me what to do so Maui jump into the sea and helped his sister and then went down bought up
 Te ika a Maui      

What I found tricky was? The thing that made it tricky was?
That we had to do a whole story of teika maui

One thing I got better with was? What helped me to get better was?
Putting more specs

Next time I would …
Not chose to do a hole story

I am most proud of …
Writing all of it

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